Eh...
This was ok, I guess. It really has nothing to do with yoga, though. My biggest complaint is that half of the parts are extremely harsh, and have nothing to back them up. You put up a good effort, though.
Eh...
This was ok, I guess. It really has nothing to do with yoga, though. My biggest complaint is that half of the parts are extremely harsh, and have nothing to back them up. You put up a good effort, though.
well it's not supposed to be about yoga, i just name all my songs randomly haha. Check out some of my other stuff.. I like it better
Three cheers for Softnyx.
This song is pretty cool. Although I've heard that Wolf Team is fun, I personally think Rakion is a lot more fun. If you remixed some of the songs from Rakion, that would be REALLY cool! :D
Though I would agree with you (and trust me, Wolfteam hit the ground PRETTY hard), I didn't really hear any unbelievable track that touched me in Rakion like this one did.
Is there a specific song you'd like me to look at? It's been so long...
thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
just short of a masterpiece
Good job on this. I see you tried some new things, and you pulled them off well. I must admit that this wasn't your best work, but it still beats out most of the stuff on the Audio Portal. Keep up the great work!
Thank you for your honest feedback BushidoBacon! Many things learned, and many things to tweak over time, but i'm very satisfied with how this particular product turned out! Not my best, I agree, but one of the more difficult projects to undertake.
Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
Whoa, man...whoa.
This is just a tiny bit too crazy. Maybe you could have smoothed it out a bit, especially at 1:15. Other than that, this is one of the reasons that you're one of my favorite authors. Keep it up!
well i could do this thing... NAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
could improve
This was good, but it seemed way too mellow for the title "Rush". Maybe "Amble" would be a more fitting one. I suggest that you make the cymbals more prominent and varied in pattern. I also agree with J4YM4N; you should have the break in the melody be earlier. I hope you improve this, and I'll definitely be watching for the full version.
No pressure, take your time. :^)
Mellow? Mellow was the last thing I was aiming for. o_O I was aiming for slow, yet dramatic... not a literal rush, but a rush in other ways.
If by cymbals you meant hihats, yeah, I can imagine those done a bit better, they're loops, after all. XD It would be a bit difficult, but definitely possible, I'll have to try it next time I open the project file.
And like I said before, the structure isn't set in stone. ;D
Thanks for the review!
Here's my scenario. :)
What I hear in this song is a man depressed and wandering aimlessly on a path somewhere during the middle ages. Suddenly, it switches to a flashback of the man in a town at night, murdering somebody and stealing their valuables. He is caught in his act and exiled from the town. As the flashback fades, it is raining and the man is on his knees and crying. He decides that he must go back to the town and redeem his sin. When he returns to the town, though, he is greeted by angry guards with swords bared and shouting, "Begone, villian!" The man is forced to flee and barely escapes with his life. Another flashback appears, showing the man several years ago with his family holding each other and smiling. Realizing that he can never return to his family, he starts back down the path, this time with a new philosophy: he must assume a new identity and start a new life, in which he does no evil.
I hope you like it. :)
I do like it : ). I kind of makes me want to write another song to follow up this one to go with the story. Too bad I'm not that good yet, lol. Maybe someday. Thanks for the story!
-Jason
KTRECORDS
good
I thought the second half was better than the first, though.
No probs man. The first half is more serious, since it's all about dad. The second half is more funny and upbeat. :)
It's up to the listener to decide if he likes the hole song or just a part of it. In any case, thanks for checking it out!
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Pretty cool, but a little fuzzy. It might just be my speakers acting up, though...
it might be the song. its an real old song and it isnt mastered or something
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